Tuesday, May 30, 2006

Short Writings from Pain II

I looked at my watch; it had been an hour since the Captain gave our patrol front control. A flare lit the night sky. My men and I sunk lower into the trench. In seconds we would probably hear the explosions on the wire, and then we would raise up and target the men, women, and children climbing through the razor wire. We waited.

“Sarge, when?”

“Hush, Ollie, you’ll know the signal.” Oliver Mason was a new body in our short patrol; fresh out of high school and thirty days out of basic. He was a big kid, so we strapped him with an M-60, and two belts of ammunition. With four grenades hanging off of his flak jacket he looked like a metal cow on two legs. He also had a big wad in his back pocket.

“Ollie,” I whispered, “what’s in your pocket?”

“Grenade, Sarge.”

“Man, you fall on your tail and you’ll kill us all.”

Nunez the Rat took a half step to the left of Ollie and glared back at his heavily armed comrade. The Rat held an unlit cigarette between his lips, but he sucked on it like a baby’s bottle. Nunez was a slight kid, about nineteen years old, perfect for poking down tunnels. He was always nervous about tunneling, but followed orders. I liked to say he was patroling the underground. I think he was still partially deaf and stunned from discharging the 45 in a tunnel earlier in the afternoon, but we needed every warm body we could find on the line that night.

I had the Tremor Dog on my right, not a four-legged one, but a man of unusual viciousness and totally uncaring. I didn’t know much about him, except I wanted him next to me. I had seen him rip through a charge of our dark enemy – his M-16 chattering from his right hip and a stolen AK firing from his left hand. He wore the notches on his knife handle like a badge of honor. Often at night he left camp only to return in the morning with another notch and a string of ears. Nobody controlled the dog.

Reynolds, the lieutenant, was on the end the back row with Big “O,” the radio guy. They were both new, simply replacements for body bags. I think Reynolds got a commission from a cereal box, I had spent most of my off minutes teaching him the art of surviving. On paper, Lieutenant Reynolds was our leader. I guess that is why he was behind us.

Big “O” the radio guy was a communications specialist. Somebody told me he was a disc jockey before the draft. He supposedly was our communications back to the line. Communications guys don't last long on the line.

The only other member of our team was Liam our forward man. He was buried under some brush - just before the wire. If the perimeter was breached he was to sit up with the fifty and begin shooting from the rear. Hopefully, his friendly fire would not find one of us. Also, if we were all down, he was to find a way to our line before the enemy caught him.

The sparks from the flare descended from the sky. I peeked through my scope at the wire, nothing was moving. I could feel my heart rate slow. “Martin Luther” never was in this situation.” I slid down the trench beside Ollie. I could see his eyes peering beneath helmet. Big white circles circled in black grease. He kind of looked like a raccoon.

“Relax Ollie, everythings smooth. Nothing moving for two clicks.” I tipped my helmet back.

Nobody felt the earth shake, nobody thought about the pain, and nobody expected the end. But, there it was, at least for us.

I heard Big "O" yell, "medic!" He was paniced.

The last thing I remember before the wire lit up, was a voice whispering to me. “Who’s in control now?”

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